Monday, June 17, 2013

Ten Things I Wish I Knew

Ten Things I wish I Knew before
Becoming a Lifeguard
11.      Be prepared to be bored.
While I was a lifeguard, I would spend a couple hours a day watching over a nearly empty pool. I didn’t have a way to entertain myself while watching over the patrons of the pool.
22.      You have to deal with unruly patrons.
On multiple occasions I was verbally abused by patrons who didn’t agree with the pool rules. I didn’t think that this would happen when I was training to become a lifeguard.
33.      Get to know your calmer patrons.
While a lifeguard, I got to know some of the nicer patrons. This was nice because I was able to strike up conversations with them. Towards the end of the summer, they also brought us things like food to show their appreciation.
44.      Try to get along with your coworkers.
If you don’t get along with your coworkers, you summer will suck because you spend so much time with them. Luckily, I knew mine and got along with them very well. This led to a relaxed and fun summer with little to no drama.
55.      Remember to practice your skills.
During the summer, you will probably have to rescue someone. At this time, you may have to call on what you learned while training. I had one rescue this summer and jumped into the pool using the wrong jump. I still rescued the person and he was fine, but I also scraped my knee on the bottom of the pool.
66.      Carry water.
This is super important because the sun is constantly beating down on you while you’re on guard. You need to replace all of the liquids you sweat out by carrying a bottle of water with you at all times.
77.      Have sensible footwear.
As a lifeguard, you will spend a lot of time on your feet. I didn’t know this, so my feet hurt quite a bit during the first few days of working. After that I wizened up and bought some comfortable shoes that allowed me to be on my feet all day.
88.      Be prepared to react.
While you may spend most of your time just waiting and watching the patrons, you will have to jump in. You CANNOT freeze up because there is a real chance someone could die. Luckily, I didn’t freeze up and saved my patron.
99.      Ignore your technology.
During my breaks, I was usually on my phone or iPod. This is not a good thing because even though technically I’m on break, I still have to help in an emergency. It is best to just do something else like eat a quick snack while on break or just relax.
110.  Listen to your Mate/Captain.

Your Mate/Captain is your boss. They are the people who write and decide schedules. It is best not to get on their bad side in case you need a favor later on in the summer. They all write your reviews at the end of the summer, so you should listen to them. 

Thursday, June 13, 2013

Chapters 9-12 Edits

So these are the edits I made to a book that  helped write in my writing class.
Antonio Romo
Honors Interdisciplinary Writing
Chapters 9-12 Edits
Chapter 9
·         Page 65:
“I reached for my alarm clock but instead all I found was a phone where my alarm clock would have been.”
The instead seems unnecessary and interrupts the flow of the sentence. Get rid of it.
·         Page 65:
I guess this person doesn’t have 20/20 vision like me.” I muttered under my breath.
The period at the end of the quote should be changed to a comma. Then it will reinforce what she muttered under her breath.
·         Page 65
I got out of bed and stepped over various pieces of clothing and shoes and walked slowly out of the room, hoping that I wouldn’t run into anyone from this family.
This seems like a run-on sentence. A period should be placed after the shoes. Then a new sentence should be started.
·         Page 65
She looked so familiar but I couldn’t place a name to that face.
The so is not needed and that could be changed to the.
·         Page 66
I walked up the stairs and saw an Asian girl waving at me but I didn’t know her…
There should be a comma after me.
·         Page 68
I basically lay there for the next period and then the bell rang.
The verb tense shifts in this sentence. It should be laid.
Chapter 10
·         Page 70
The house was quiet, but a soft glow from light downstairs illuminated the hallway, so I figured that someone had woken up already.
I think that the light part doesn’t make sense. There needs to be an a.
·         Page 71
Stepping outside, I realized that I was in Beverly—usually the homes in this neighborhood were older, but Olivia’s house had a more modern feel that I was admittedly fond of.
The usually should go after the were.
·         Page 73
“Something weird’s going on and I think you know it.”
I’m a little unsure about this sentence. There could be an about after the know.
·         Page 75
In the moments I stood watching Joey from across the room, I felt a tireless yearning and unconditional affection, but looming not too far off was a foreboding cloud of hopeless despair.
It seems like a run on sentence to me. There should be a new sentence after the affection part.
·         Page 77
I regarded sarcastically the iPod’s shuffle feature’s…
Regarded should be switched with sarcastically.
Chapter 11
·         Page 82
I looked down at Nia’s body and tears fell down heavier and more frequently I feared I would be stuck and never be able to be myself again
There is a period missing after frequently.
Chapter 12
·         Page 83
Today I woke up to the alarms of a phone and alarm clock, one after the other set for 6:30 AM.
There should be an an before alarm since there is an a before cell phone.
·         Page 83
My body sat itself down at the desk and my hands immediately began working its magic and fifteen
Its should be changed to their because it is talking about the hands and there are two of them.
·         Page 87
However, it was interesting to live a peaceful life of a privileged Asian girl.

I believe the a after live should be changed to a the. It makes more sense that way. 

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Honors Interdisciplinary Writing 2013 Final

So these are the questions that I made for the final exam for the class.
12) What is the definition of remonstrate? A)To reason or plead in protest   B)To acknowledge or give in    C)To use force to try to persuade someone    D)To yell during a demonstration
13) In The Joy Luck Club, what element does Rose Hsu Jordan lack? A) Wind   B) Water         C) Wood   D) Earth
14) In Fences, what did Troy almost die of in 1941? A) Tuberculosis   B) Pneumonia                  C) Cancer   D) A battle in World War 2     
15) What did Jing-mei/June do that disappointed her mother? A) She stopped playing piano      B) She dropped out of college   C) She got into a fist fight with Waverley   D) A and B
16) What is the definition of numinous? A) Great in number; A large quantity of    B)Supernatural, mysterious or awe-inspiring   C) Very bright, blinding    D) Bland, boring

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Thursday, May 23, 2013

Steve Jobs' Commencement Address

Steve Jobs’ Commencement Address

            I enjoyed this speech for a number of reasons. I liked how he told the students not to be brought down by the world. That they should persevere. I liked how he told them to stay naïve. I don’t think he was going with a negative connotation, but with one that hoped that they would still marvel at the wonders of the world. He also said that everything would work out in the end and it would only make sense when looking back. I liked this because it told me not to freak out about every little thing and keep moving forward.

Tuesday, May 21, 2013

David Pogue TED Talk


David Pogue TED Talk
            I thought this TED Talk was neat. I already knew some of the shortcuts, but the ones I didn’t know pleasantly surprised me. I know that I am going to use the ones that I didn’t know about in conjunction with the ones I know to save time.

Thursday, May 16, 2013

David Blaine TED Talk


David Blaine TED Talk
            At first, I didn’t like this TED Talk. Blaine sounded incredibly boring and unenthusiastic. But then it started to pick up when he starting to talk about what he was trying to do. Holding his breath for that long just seemed insane. I’m not sure if he can hold his breath for 44 minutes. If he can do it, I will be incredibly surprised. Sadly, I did not get to finish watching the TED Talk.

Tony Robins TED Talk


Tony Robins TED Talk
            I thought this TED Talk was interesting. I liked how it started off right away and went to the subject of emotions and decisions. The talk got me thinking about how I react to my emotions and decisions I have made